Don't forget what we learned! (May 24)

   Yesterday, my teacher said that we could not perform what we had learned in our essays. I also had many mistakes in my paragraph. For example, there are a luck of indent, a mistake for usage of parentheses and an error in citation. Although my teacher taught us how to do them again and again,  most of us could not do them. These are very important when we write essays after this. We must memorize what our teacher taught us and use them appropriately.

 Also, I learned the importance of evidence through yesterday's class and watching four videos that my teacher sent to me. A worthwhile evidence is accurate, relevant, representative and adequate. I noticed the difficulty of  fulfilling all of these criteria through writing essay. However, we have to add good evidence into our essays in order to persuade the readers, so all of these criteria are necessary. I'd like to be careful about choosing good evidence when I write my essay.