It is necessary to use grammarly!

  We reviewed someone’s CWT papers in ARW class yesterday. I found it was difficult to assess others’ papers. Mistakes in grammars or spellings that I noticed on their papers were what I am likely to make. I recognized that it is important to read my own sentences objectively after I finish writing it. At the same time, I could learn various expressions that I had never used by reading their sentences. We should not use same expressions again and again on one paper, so the more we learn them, the better writing we can write. As stated above, we can learn a lot through reading others’ writings. Therefore, I think we should take advantage of these opportunities.

  After that, we learned how to make our own Evernote accounts. We can share materials that we use for our essays by using it. Also, Mr. Dan taught us that there are several ways to search materials that are about what we want to know. I’d like to read materials and watch videos about “refugee camps” as many as possible in order to write a good essay.

  Lastly, I’d like to tell you about grammarly. I was surprised at it! How useful grammarly is!! I can notice many mistakes that I cannot find by myself in my sentences. When I ran my paragraph through it, I found from trivial mistakes to serious mistakes. In addition, it marks my sentences on a score of 100 and I got a low score. However, this encourages me to write better because I am one of those who never give up. I dream of getting a score of 100!

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