Make My Essay More Persuasive!

  We started reading "The Old Man and the Sea". It is difficult for me to read it without a dictionary because there are many special words of ship. However, Mr.Dan sent us some picture with explanation about ship. It will help me to read the book more smoothly. I have never read a book that was written by a Nobel Prize winner in English, so I want to enjoy reading it.

  I learned how to make my essay more persuasive yesterday. My teacher said that "survey" is the most important source. Although I thought it is difficult to send out questionnaires about what I'm going tow right about, my teacher taught us how to do it. By using computer, we can ask my section mates or another section's member some questions easily! I 'd like to take advantage of it if necessary.

Also, I learned about "Fallacies". I didn't know that there are so many kinds of fallacies. Mr.Dan said that students tend to make mistakes in syllogism, so we have to be careful about it. I want to write a persuasive essay, or a essay that can change the readers' mind.